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Wednesday, March 3, 2010

The lady or the tiger (ending)

Which door should I open? The princess pointed to the left door...... Knowing her semi-barbaric personality, I knew that if she could not get what she wanted, she would rather I die.I saw her right eyelid twitching and that was she always do when she lied. Immediately, I saw through her scheme.
I gambled with my life and was on a path of no return.I decided to open the right door. Out came from that door was a beautiful lady.
The princess was crestfallen and she was filled with jealousy. She could not bear to see her lover with another woman. Now,she started to cherish the time they spent together.
"Oh coward! How can you inflict such pain on me!" A sense of betrayal started to fill the princess. The lover looked up and saw a rainbow.

1 comment:

  1. The ending is quite nice, following the 'and lived happily ever after; style most people used to write their story. However, I would suggest that you twist the story a bit so that it can suprise the reader to make the story more exciting.
    Fun Xue Yao

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